Writing Excerpt, Mohammad, 3-307

This is an excerpt from Mohammad’s writing:

Goring To My Dad’s Warehouse

One day I went with my dad to his warehouse. It was very messy. Then I went in his truck. It smelled really bad. Then he showed me the house that he was working on and I saw a crack. The bricks were white. The house was kinda small. My dad is still working on it.

(Mohammad, 3-307)

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